Trial 39


      Trial 39
A stranger walks into a wolf s den of a bar The men there are ready to kill him just for the pleasure and thrill of seeing him die But they quickly realize he is not to be trifled with, and that the title of Stranger could not beapt This is an Old West tale with a Sci Fi twist. Best Read [ Trial 39 ] By [ Abraham Lopez ] – tbjewellers.co.uk

Abraham spent his formative years in rural Colorado, where he was born He has also lived in Northern Nevada, Virginia, and Northwest Arkansas These disparate environments and local cultures have had a great impact on Abraham s view of America and his writing styles Though educated as a computer programmer, Abraham hopes to be a full time writer in the near future.

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      Trial 39
 ] By [ Abraham Lopez ]  For Kindle ePUB or eBook – tbjewellers.co.uk
  • Kindle Edition
  • 19 pages
  • Trial 39
  • Abraham Lopez
  • English
  • 25 January 2019

10 thoughts on “ Trial 39

  1. says:

    The only reason I didn t give this story four stars was the rotating POV in such a short work, I found the shifts in character perspective dragged me out of the narrative, and I had to re adjust This is an utterly personal thing for me, and fixing this may not be the best thing for the story On the plus side, I was intrigued by the world Mr Lopez alluded to with such light brushstrokes I would love, love, love if this were expanded into a longer work I want...

  2. says:

    A Stranger walks into a bar, a bar where everyone see s him as weak and ready to kill him Little do they know that this Stranger is not to be F ed with He is faster, stronger, and smarter then all of them combined He cleans up the bar, after telling them who is he I would love to see this as a novel I want to know about the Stranger I want to know why he traveling like he does Why he feels the need to do wha...

  3. says:

    The beginning of Trial 39 feels familiar to begin with, one that can be seen in countless westerns, but then it takes a turn into science fiction The plot of this short story is alright, and it draws up some cool images, but what I find fascinating is the shifting point of view It took me by surprise,...

  4. says:

    This is an excellent short story It is very cinematic I loved the continuous change in the point of view at first, it is a little disconcerting, but then it starts to work pretty well and in the end I felt it like a very solid and well executed exercise that works very well with the fast ...

  5. says:

    MehI liked the ideas of motion and time travel presented The story was OK, but I felt like the motivations and characterizations were lacking In addition, the multiple perspective changes in paragraphs almost rendered the story unreadable.

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